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Maraku NR Genin
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| Name: Maraku Zenpachi Age: 27 Gender: Male Clan: Zenpachi Clan Appearance: https://media.photobucket.com/image/anime%20ninja%20guys/kagome728/My%20men/Random%20hot%20anime%20guys/Black_Ninja_by_gelgoogkg.jpg?o=79With - Spoiler:
Maraku's pretty tall about 6'3. A perfect height for the weight of 187 pounds. He's pretty skinny and well shaped. Maraku has white skin except for his right ankle were he was burned therefore it being a charcoal black. His face is round shaped and is usually very pale as if he is sick. His nose has somewhat of a point and his lips are pale white instead of pink. The outer lines of his eyes have a dark look seeming as he wears eyeliner. His eye's and pupil's are a cold blank white. Maraku has short light brown hair that is the same distance of his ears. It shines in the light sometimes and is never tangled of frizzy. There usally is one long strand that hangs in front of his face and always bothers him. Personality: - Spoiler:
Maraku should be best described as the quiet type. Maraku never shows emotion unless the situation demands it. Under normal times and situations Maraku will have the same bored expression pastered upon his face. Most of the time Maraku wont speak alot. Not much of a talker Maraku will stay to his own thoughts and dreams. On the rare occasion Maraku engages into a long conversation, this is more than smalltalk, Maraku will only do so because of something that intrests him greatly. Maraku dosent like to be rushed. Most of the time Maraku will take his time in doing things, so engrossed in his thoughts Maraku wont do things at a faster rate than he needs to. During battle Maraku regards his enemies with the same expression and attitude he gives his comrades: complete boredom and contempt. Battle is the only time Maraku will do things at a higher speed rate. Maraku enjoys a good battle, but a long carried on one bores him very easily and as such he will want to end it soon. A bad trait in which he recived from his father is the long fuse of temper. It takes alot of things and happenings to make Maraku angry. On the occasion he is angry people should steer clear as his anger is built up from many previous times. Because of his building of anger, Maraku will take most insults and put downs from anyone. He will simply shurg them off in the beginning, but once the anger is built up to much he will blow. And that's when people's ear drums are split. When it comes to killing Maraku has no trouble in doing so. In his eyes killing is something that just happens and it is surly inevitable. In the case of love Maraku has absoulte no care for it. Love is merely a feeling of over happniess that is no more than a lie. History: Pre-Academy - Spoiler:
Maraku was born in the Village of Konohagakure. There, he learned everything he knew, and still is. He has sworn to protect his village even though if it meant risking his life. That seemed to be a tradition in the Zenpachi family. During the birth of Maraku, his Parents had promised to raise him up to be a great Shinobi, one that knew the laws of a Shinobi, and would never think to break them. One that would never betray his village, and hopefully the next Hokage; Maraku Zenpachi.
At a tender age, (3) Maraku was taken to his Father's training grounds by his Mother to watch. Maraku was just a child, and knew nothing of what his Father was always doing there. All what his Father did at that time never seemed to gain his interest. But his Father's beautiful techniques seemed to. The 10 flower bomb, sprout, grappling vines and so on. It seemed Maraku was often interested in plants. Why he was interested in this harmful substance was unknown to those around him, but would soon be revealed later in his future.
Academy Today, today, was the day Maraku was to be enrolled in the Shinobi academy. Where he would learn the rules, and ways of the Shinobi. Today, Maraku turned Seven years old, and his Father thought now was a good time for him to be enrolled in the Academy. After all, he was already Talented, and could defeat most of the students who were already enrolled in the Academy thanks to the teachings of his Father.
Maraku was beaming with joy. Today, would be the day he would prove to everyone in the village that he had what it took to become a great leader, and the next Hokage; a powerful Shinobi. He took his first step into the classroom, sat down, and listened to what the Teacher had to teach him. He was intrigued by all the teachings. It seemed his Father had been holding back on a lot, but that didn't matter, that was what he was here for. If his Father had told him all he knew about being a Shinobi, then there would be no need of going to the Academy. It would just be a repetition of all what he had been thought at home, and he was glad his Father had held back.
Maraku was a good listener. He listened very well to all what the Teacher had to say. He took notes down, and practiced all what he had been thought at school at home, and even learned more about what he had been thought at home whenever he asked his Father. He was now ready for the next step of becoming a great shinobi; The Genin Exams.
Genin The Genin Exams was an Exam, as already known as. It was the time when an academy student matured into an even great Shinobi. A Genin, the second least rank in the Shinobi rankings. Maraku participated in it, and passed with flying colors. His Father, mother, and relatives were proud of him. He was the first in the line of the Maraku family to pass the Genin exams in one try, already making him a prodigy in his family. He was going to be the one that would surpass his Father, the strongest Family member at the time.
After obtaining the rank as a Genin at the age of Eleven, Maraku's Father knew it was time for Maraku to be given training. Prepare him for the next big step of completing his (Maraku's) dream to become the next Hokage. The Chuunin exams. Now, was also the time when his Father, Mother, relatives would find out why Maraku was interested in the substance fire, and more. Maraku was taking the Elemental test. The Elemental test was when a Shinobi was to find out which Element, out of the five; Wind, Fire, Water, Earth, and Lightning, the Shinobi held within him. The Shinobi could also hold two of the five elements within him, and ONLY two if Lucky. Those who held one at Genin were of no difference. It just meant they would find out their second element at a higher rank; Jounin. Maraku found out he held only one element within him. Grass element. A destructive combination. Those two elements could destroy an entire village if the shinobi who held them weren't careful with it. Maraku's Father was happy his son had this same element as he did, and thus proceeded to teach Maraku all the techniques he knew for his rank. (Maraku's rank.)
Chunnin Maraku spent three years as a chunnin. The first was spent basically becoming formiliar with the new style, the grass element. His father continued to train him for about three month, however his mother basically threaten to divorce his father should she continue to teach his son. At this stage, it was too late. Though he was no longer taught by his father, he had learned enough of the basics to start improvising and even begin crafting jutsu of his own. Coupled with a good study habit, he literally applied physics and chemistry to his jutsu. With knowledge of how an element SHOULD work, and the potencial for further development of the technique, Maraku steady began to master the elment of his people. Upon further use of his clan's Kkg, he stumbled upon the second stage of the 'Aggomotto' and even further abilities were unlocked to him. The second year was actual active duty, where his status was put to the test, however, even only at fourteen, he was able to accomplish the majority of what was needed of him, even able to lead a few smaller scale missions on his own. His resume was very impressive to that point.
The last year of his chunnin days was basically spent being taught the procedures for the third stage of the eye of raw. Though it was normally saved for Jounin and higher rankings, the elders thought that he had enough skill and control to begin mastering the third level as a chunnin. This wasn't exactly easy for him, and didn't come as naturally as he thought. There were many psychological aspects to this third eye, the final normal stage of the Kkg, that he was unable to master at his current level. Though an entire year of training and missions passed, he still couldn't master the third level of the 'eye of raw'. However, his progress was noticable, not only to those in his clan but also to Konohagakure officials, and he was given the rank of Jounin, after completing his fifth 'A' rank mission.
Jonin Maraku became a jounin and got her own little squad. He didnt get an Zenpachi for some reason, and this made him just a little angry. He wanted to train some of her family like only he could, but the hokage's decision was final. He decided to take what he had and make them as good as they could be. He wasnt the gloomy, dead inside person he is now, so he was fun but kept the genin on a good track. They grew fast and Maraku went on many missions with them. He loved his genin and trained them into the best squad in konoha. Even his other family from other squads envied this squad. They were quite powerful and did very well. The chuunin exams were comming up soon and Maraku decided to give them a slight edge. He taught all of them to create shadow clones. The two boys could create two clones safely and the girl was a natural. She created 4 and could have probably gone to 5. They entered the chuunin exams and started the battles. They breezed through the forest area and destroyed two other squads before making it to the checkpoint.
Once finished with that they began the tournament section of the chuunin exams. There were 16 genin in this tournament and it started off well the squad defeated their first two opponents easily, but there were other powerful genin in this tournament. Both boys were eliminated in the semi-finals and one was beat by his own squadmember. The lone girl faced down a crazy looking genin from the cloud village. He had a wide variety of strange lightning jutsu. She got cornered at the end of the match but surprised everyone when she made 2 shadow clones and defeated the cloud genin while he was still surprised that the clones accually had substance. She won the chuunin exams and the whole squad was promoted to chuunin together.
Turning Point Maraku was given the title of sannin at the age of 25. He didn’t really want to be though, and abandoned his team to another Sensei. Maraku started to his study, experiment, and test new jutsu’s and toxins. However he was using people as test subjects instead of animals. Noises of death and suffering sounded from his home and not before long people began to investigate, the Council of Konohagakure found him guilty of torture and homicide. Maraku refused to move, and so they decided on one thing. Kill him. After several failed assassination attempts, they Evicted him from his home when he went out to shop. Leaving some of his things at the doorway for him to keep everything else was gone.
And so he gathered up what he could and left, “Screw you guys” was on his mind as he left Konoha, not returning anytime soon.
Alone in the Dark Maraku’s full potential to be a ruthless and unstoppable fighting force emerged here. He was ruthless killer and a wanted Criminal. He became a “regular” in some of the criminal pubs making him a liked person. His need for smoking was seen here as he became obsessed with Nicotine and his alcoholism fueled some of the battles he fought. He was an odd fellow to say the least, he could instill the greatest fear in a room, or make the best company, the problem was you never knew which it was going to be.
Not really being able to bare the life as a missing nin Maraku was starting to become lonely. He started once again to rely on his human experiments. Maraku at the point had lost it completely. He started killing, extracting DNA, and doing whatever he could to up-grade himself. He always had the ill will go go back into Konoha and take over the village. Maraku then slowly took over a small village of Kusagakure and slowly began to build an army that would be strong enough to stand on the same field as the shinobi of konoha.
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| | | Maraku NR Genin
Posts : 98 Join date : 2009-08-31
Shinobi Infomation Rank:: Village Leader Chakra Bar: (350/350) Health: (400/400)
| Subject: Re: Maraku Zenpachi (complete) Tue Sep 01, 2009 10:13 am | |
| Village: Kusagakure Rank: Kusakage element: Earth, Water Nindo: War......^_^ Equipment: - Spoiler:
Name: Rose Whip Appearance: This weapon looks nothing more then a extremely thick vine. Other then this vine being thick it is engraved by Maraku's very own chakra. It has thorns extending from the base all the the way to the tip of it. It reaches out a whopping 10 meters long. Rank: A Special Abilities: One of Maraku's signature techniques where he uses his chakra to grow a rose from its seed state to its flowering state and then into a long thorny whip that is capable of cutting even through steel. The thorns of this whip are deady poisonous. Because this vine is completely covered in Maraku's chakra it make it fireproof. The thorns on this whip has the ability to shoot of but more will come to replace them.(poison causes the opponent to lose the H20 within their bodies causing first cramping then dehydration.) Weakness: Anything else that is chakra based the Rose Whip can't cut through it.
Name: Fingernail Shards Appearance: These are sharp metal shards attached to the fingers. They are 4inches long and gold. They are on all eight fingers. The shards are strangely very hard to break for they are made out of pure adamanium. Rank: C Special Abilities: Are a climbing tool designed to be worn on the users hands, using small leather strap connected around the wrists. The claws enable ninjas to climb walls and trees and in desperate cases for self defense by cutting the oppontnt deeply. Origin: This weapon was given to Maraku by his mother after Maraku had passed the academy to become genin.
Name: Paper Ball Bombs Appearance: The containers are paper bomb explosives that have a small hook to them. These containers are roughly the size of a golf ball to which they can be discretely thrown to an enemy or surface without much notice. The explosion these cause are compared to those of C2, C3, or C4. These are consealed within these container to make them easier for projectile. These containers activate upon impact igniting the explosives upon impact. Maraku only has thirty of these. Rank: C Special Abilities: Nothing special here just small explosives. They explode on instant impact. The impact are the size of C2 explosives. Though that doesn't seem powerful it actually will do great damage to an opponent. Because of the containers these explosive are actually slightly smaller than a normal explosive note. Can be released three at a time. Origin: These explosive were bought at the local weapon shop by Maraku.
Name: Giant Folding Fan Appearance: The appears to be a giant form of a church fan. The exact same thing except it's five times bigger than the usual fan. This fan is usually carried upon Maraku's back. Rank: D Special Abilities: A huge fan that is used for both offensive and defense technique. Manipulates the air around the user when it is used. Can be used to take flight for short distances. Origin: The was the greater gift give to Maraku by his mother.
Name: Fog Gun Appearance: This is blowgun that's attaches to Maraku's right forearm. It is completely metal with a hundred little blowholes. It circulates around his whole forearm completely. Rank: D Special Abilities: This gun has the ability to to extinguish a thick fog that completely blinds anyone in the given area. Origin: This weapon was a secret gift given to Maraku my is academy teacher after passing the ninja academy.
Name: Ninja Boomerang Appearance: My boomerang look exactly like the image you see you see above. It is all brown and made of complete wood. The worlds hardest wood to be exact. but wat isn't listed in the pic are the initials of Maraku Zenpachi. Rank: C Chakra:2 Special Abilities: This is weapon is completely covered by Maraku's chakra. This chakra covering allows this boomerang to cut through even the toughest metals. It is completely made up wood the worlds hardest wood and is extremely hard to break. Only amount of chakra that is needed is to cover the edges/ tips of the boomerang. Origin: This weapon was a life long toy of Maraku's. He has just found a way to portrait it in battle.
Clan: Zenpachi Clan
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| | | Maraku NR Genin
Posts : 98 Join date : 2009-08-31
Shinobi Infomation Rank:: Village Leader Chakra Bar: (350/350) Health: (400/400)
| Subject: Re: Maraku Zenpachi (complete) Tue Sep 01, 2009 10:37 am | |
| Basic Jutsu: - Spoiler:
Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Element: N/A Description: This jutsu lets the user quickly switch places with another nearby object, such as a plant (normally a section of a log), an animal, or even another person within reach, leaving the opponent open to a counter-attack. Explosive tags can be attached to the replacement for an added surprise. Fundamentally, all ninja know this technique.
Name: Henge no Jutsu Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Element: N/A Description: This jutsu allows the user to assume the appearance of another person, animal, or object. This is one of the basic jutsu taught at the Konoha Ninja Academy. Fundamentally, all ninja know this jutsu. The transformation jutsu is considered to be among the more difficult E-ranked techniques, since it requires constant emission of chakra while mentally maintaining the form. On top of that, the user would be, most likely, interacting with the environment. This puts much mental strain on the inexperienced ninja.
Name: Bunshin no Jutsu Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Element: N/A Description: This technique creates intangible copies of the user. The clones are simply illusions and will dissipate when they come into contact with something. The illusions can be seen through by the Byakugan and the Sharingan. A person with normal eyes can also distinguish the clones from the original, since the clones will not disrupt the area around themselves with their movement (won't kick up dust, crush grass, etc.).
Name: Shunshin no Jutsu Rank: D-S Type: Ninjutsu Element: N/A Description: This jutsu is a high-speed movement technique, allowing a ninja to move short to long distances at an almost untraceable speed. To an observer, it appears as if the user has teleported. A puff of smoke is occasionally used to disguise the user's movements. It is accomplished by using chakra to temporarily boost the user's reflexes. The amount of chakra required depends on the overall distance between the user and their intended destination.
Name: Repulsion Shield (a.k.a. Repulsion Crush {Small Scale}) Rank: C Type: N/A Element: N/A Description: By focusing his chakra, Maraku can create a ball of chakra around himself and then release the chakra forcing the repulse to deflect any mass coming towards the user within 2 meters. this jutsu is both offensive and defensive.
Name:Chakra Blade Rank: B Type: Ninjutsu Element:Chakra Manipulation Description: Rein has the ability to create a blade of pure chakra. The blade can be as hard as steel, and as sharp as a dagger. The chakra of the member will begin to flow out from the desired point of the body, (arms, palms, etc), and begin to take shape into a blade. The amount of chakra used, depends on thesize of the blade, and can be cast away by a higher-level technique. Extent two feet from the hand
Name: Repulsion Shield (a.k.a. Repulsion Crush {Large Scale}) Rank: A Type: N/A Element: N/A Description: By focusing his chakra, Maraku can create a ball of chakra around himself and then release the chakra forcing the repulse to deflect any mass coming towards the user within 5 meters. this jutsu is both offensive and defensive.
Grass Jutsu - Spoiler:
Name: Vine Curl Rank: D Type: Ninjutsu Element: Grass Description:With a few assembled handsigns Maraku summons a long vine from beneath the opponent's feet, binding them tight and rendering them to lose speed and agility by half for the next post.
Name: Root Charge Rank: D Type: Ninjutsu Element: Grass Description: The user forces their chakra into the ground making it enter the roots of whatever plant that's nearby. The roots then force themselves upon the surface reacting and replenishing 1/2 of the user chakra back into their body. By doing this jutsu the user can't use any ninjutsu for the next two post until the replenishing is complete.
Name: Pollen Rank: D Element: Grass Description: After performing the seals, you must slam your hand on the ground, which will send a poisonous pollen into the air that will block your location, and poison any that breath it. only the user will be immune to this poison. (this poison causes exhaustion) Effect: The poison causes difficulty breathing, which cuts stamina in half.
Name: Soukon Yusou (Grass Roots Transport) Rank: D Type: N/A Element: Grass Description: The user goes into the ground, turning into grass roots, then grows up out of the ground at the desired location.
Name: Zesshi Nensan (Fanged Tongue Acid) Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Element: Grass Description: A very corrosive acid which is expelled from the mouth. It is capable of being projected far distances, with the strength to even dissolve rocks. However, being as acidic as it is, it must be spat very cautiously from the mouth, making it a very slow attack that will not succeed unless your opponent's speed is hindered.
NAme: Bukaretsu Youdoku Bunshin (Exploding Poisonous Clone) Rank: B Type: Ninjutsu Element: Grass Description: By using a herb bought froma store or aquired in some other way, one can make a special clone out of it. The properties of this clone lie within the herb and will explode itno a cloud of poison that have the same effects of the herb used to make the clone. These clones can explode on command, or do so when they are hit. (This poison effects the opponent breathing by entering the lungs and closing down their chest cavities.)
Name: Shokubutsu Taihai (植 廃) Plant Degeneration Rank: B Type: Ninjutsu Element: Grass Effects: Can deteriorate all plants within a fifty-meter radius when user touches the ground. Description: The user covers their hand in chakra, giving the chakra a charge that counters the spark of life within plants and plant-like creations. When the user touches the ground with that hand, any plant life or plant-like creation within a fifty meter radius is destroyed almost instantly. All of the plant die and fall to the ground.
Name: Bamboo Fortress Rank: B Type: Ninjutsu Element: Grass Range: (0-10m) Description:a whole fortress of bamboo come rising from the groung providige Maraku with a defense. Unlike Soukontate (Grass Roots Shield), Bamboo Fortress isn't weak against the fire element and protect very well against all comings.
Name: Hekishoku Nousho Chouin (緑 書 印) Emerald Calligraphy Sealing Rank: A Type: Ninjutsu Element: Grass Description: A different method to perform techniques other than the usage of hand seals is granted to the user. The user places chakra into a seed with his name carved into it. After planting this seed onto an opponent it will start to grow vines all around slowly sealing off their chakra slowly.( 5 post the their chakra is sealed completely). These vines are also covered in chakra rendering them unable to be cut my any weapon.
Name: 100 Bombing Flowers Rank: A Type: Ninjutsu Element: Grass Description: With this jutsu Maraku can assemble a few handsigns and force 100 flowers into the air surrounding the battle field in different locations then causing them to explode causing major damage onto any and everything it's near.
Name: Mori Dokudokushii (森 毒) Venomous Forest Rank: S Skill: Ninjutsu Element: Grass Effects Creates a forest where everything contains a venom that will be absorbed through the pores should any plant-life in the forest come into contact with bare skin, paralyzing and poisoning the victim. Drawback The user is also susceptible to this technique. Description: The user summons up their chakra and pushes it into the earth, filling the ground with chakra for one-hundred meters in every direction, changing the molecular structure to that of a more venomous constitution. From there, the user forces trees to explode from the ground for up to half a mile high. The forest resembles that of a rain forest, except all of the leaves are purple with a dark green rim and hide needle-like thorns on the edges, the bark of the tree containing a slight blue tint with longer needles as well. In addition to the needles that edge the strange leaves, a powder is released from them as well, that when breathed in will paralyze and poison the opponent, while causing hallucinations that they are still walking through the forest.
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| | | Maraku NR Genin
Posts : 98 Join date : 2009-08-31
Shinobi Infomation Rank:: Village Leader Chakra Bar: (350/350) Health: (400/400)
| Subject: Re: Maraku Zenpachi (complete) Tue Sep 01, 2009 10:42 am | |
| RP sample: - Spoiler:
It was the day after he had graduated. He was finally a Genin, but still had a lot to learn. He made his way back to his home during the day to tell his parents. His house was empty with a small note. We will be back tonight. That is all there was to the note. No explanation, no time, no real anything. He sighed and made his way to his room. His thoughts flowed to the whereabouts of his sisters, but quickly vanished. He was tired and now was the only time he could rest.
The sun finally went down when he woke; the wind blew gently outside his window. He stretched a bit before rising out of his bed. He moved back into the main room of his home. Still his parents hadn’t returned. A quick look of worry crossed his face, but quickly vanished. ‘They will be back.’ The thought crossed his mind quickly as he got a drink of water.
He drank slowly, while staring out at the village. The calm wind made everything seem peaceful and calm. It was like the village wasn’t active at night, like all the weapons were locked away in their homes. At least that was what he thought. The sound made him jump as he heard a bang outside his door. ‘What the….’ His thoughts raced as his right hand made its way to in front of his nose, his mind and chakra already setting for an attack. A quick movement outside the window made his hand drop. It was his father and he was hurt…badly.
Fear shot through his face as he made his way to the door. “Son.” The words were weak and hardly audible over the wind. Rein made his way quickly to his father’s side and studied the wounds. His father was bleeding to death right in front of him. His hands shot to the wounds and slowly he tried to heal them. After about 5 minutes he thought he was done. His eyes scanned the wounds again and the blood was still coming. What had he done wrong? Why wasn’t the blood stopping? Again he tried and again the wounds did not stop.
He was about to try again, but a hand stopped him. “You didn’t pay attention did you?” Rien’s eyes shot to his fathers and the image was burned. His father’s face was filled with disappointment, resentment, and the one that hurt the most…hatred. There was full out hatred for his son who now was going to let him die because of his ignorance. Because he didn’t study hard enough, didn’t learn enough and for that it was his father’s life. Failure was what Marid was now at this point. A complete and total failure to his family’s name.
His father’s grip tightened and he pushed Rein away. “Go! Before it comes.” Rein’s eyes went wide as the hatred was now visible by the light of his home. There was hatred and pain in his father’s eyes. Anger flushed through Rein’s body. At himself and the thing who had done this. He ran to his father’s side and wrapped his arms around him. “Father I am sorry.” He whispered tears flowing from his eyes.
A sound in the bushes made his father jump. “Rein go!” His eyes scanned the darkness as he tried to sit up. Rein’s arms wrapped tighter around his father. “No father you can’t die. I won’t let you.” The tears began to flow harder as he squeezed his father. “No dad!” His face was grabbed by two weak hands and he was face to face with his father. “Tears are not for ninja. You should know this by now, so why do you cry? You are a failure to me Rein. It’s a shame I have to die in such a presence.” Those were the last words his father would ever speak. A sharp beam of chakra came and hit him dead in the throat. His hands dropped and his eyes went blank. His body dropped to the ground with a soft thud. That was the end of his father.
Rein’s eyes widened at the words that had been spoken. His father had just told him he was a failure, not to himself, but to his whole family. The blood from his father’s throat splattered on his face. Anger now replaced the sadness that was inside of him. Anger, hatred, regret, pain, disgrace, contempt, and failure all rushed through his body at once. All those emotions shot at his thoughts. They screamed in his mind almost taunting him.
The owner of this chakra stepped out of the darkness and laughed. “Well I finally got him.” The joy in the voice made Rein’s stomach sick. “And what do I have here? A child ninja crying over his father.” The laughter was sick and twisted as a crane with four tails made his way over to Rein. “Are you sad little one?” A sharp pain crossed through Rein’s stomach as the words were spoken. “I asked you a question child.” More pain shot across Rein’s body. “Come on let’s have fun with this one.” "I'm taking that his man I kill is your father." The tailed craned laughed one more time at the hopeless Rein.
Five minutes. Five minutes of pure pain and torture. Five minutes of blows that should have knocked him out. Five minutes of pure hell. The four tails laughed and kept making sneering comment. “Still awake huh? Well maybe I should take you out like your father then.” It laughed again as only two tails were drawn. “Should I kill you fast or slow huh?” More laughter left it's throat as it joked about how to kill the child.
Rein’s body ached. Everything about him hurt. There was nothing left for him. He had lost his father. He had shamed his family. There was nothing left for any ninja after that. ‘At least I can die with honor.’ This thought crossed his mind as he watched the four tails. His eyes glanced over to where his father laid dead, his blood soaking into the sand. Rein’s anger returned as he scanned his father’s corpse. His hatred grew within him. His hands moved and he pushed himself up weakly, his eyes staring at his feet, tears flowing from his eyes. “I will kill you.” His words were soft, but loud enough for the bijuu to hear.
The four tails bijuu looked at him and laughed loudly. “Oh did I hear that correctly? You're is going to kill me.” The third and fourt tail stood up with the first two. “Oh no I must retreat.” Again it laughed in greif looking at Rein. “Ok you little s***. Its time for you to die.” It viciously charged Rein. The chakra of the bijuu aimed for his throat.
Rein’s head slowly raised and his hand was already set. “BURN IN HELL!” The rage left his body and the four talis stopped instantly. Rein’s chakra flowed uncontrollably out of his body. The four tails looked in a daze. It's faces twisted in pain and blood began to flow from it's mouths. This technique was like no other. One that even Rein couldn’t explain. It was genjutsu mixed with medical ninjutsu and ninjutsu alike. His chakra seemed to shoot out at his opponent while it was in a dazed trance. It spread through it's body like a sick virus destroying everything it touched. The pain was excruciating both to him and the bijuu. His chakra flowed around every cell of their body. Unlike healing jutsu this jutsu destroyed everything. It took the structure of the cell and imploded it. Simply just making the body collapse within itself.
Two minutes. Two minutes passed and the four tails was dead. Rein’s body gave out and he fell to the ground. The wind picked up, as he lay there completely drained of chakra. ‘Father I did it.’ The thought crossed his mind before he blacked out. A ninja from his village happened to be passing by. He saw the young boy and the two corpses. He moved quickly to the boy and took him inside his home and laid him down on his bed. He left quickly and silently and went to report what he saw to the Hokage.
Two Days Later.
The sun splashed across the window onto Rein’s face. This startled him and he shot up looking around. His mind quickly went over what had just happened the night before. Or he thought it was the night before. He went to jump out of bed, but was held down by the sharp pain that had shot through his body. He flinched in pain then moved again with more caution.
The village was buzzing and people filled the streets. The two corpses had already been moved from where they were. Rein looked and shook his head. Was it a dream? Had he dreamed all of this had happened? The sharp pain that shot through his body told him other wise. He turned and then saw the note in the same place it had been. That’s when he knew it wasn’t a dream.
The Note Read
Dear, Rein this is your Kage speaking. If you reading this letter then it means that I didn't make it. If your not clear of what I'm talking about I performed a jutsu upon you to seal the four tail crane within you. I can only hope that you use this cranes power to bring peace and tranquility to this world. As your Kage this is my wish. Please do this for me Rein for everyone in village and the shinobi world is depending on you. Please, I repeat. Please do not fail me as my future successor. I believe in you.
He went and got ready slowly trying not to injure himself anymore. His first plan was to go to the health facility and get fixed up. A sigh left his throat as he made it out into the busy streets. Quickly he made it to the facility and was treated. Everything for him was back to normal. A smile crossed his face as he made his way back home. Would he report what had happened? He knew he should, but what was the point. There was no evidence that anythingever been there. The only thing he had that he could remember clearly was his father’s face. The look of shame that his father wore before he died.
Another thought crossed his mind as well. The look of the bijuu's face just before it died. This thought shot through his mind and was just as clear as his father’s face. His mind raced around trying to figure out the jutsu he had used. It had to be powerful to knock him out for two days. After about ten minutes of thinking about it, he finally just gave up. Whatever he had done he would learn how to do it again sooner or later. He nodded and then got a drink of water.
As he drank it his father’s face crossed his mind again. Pain shot through his body as he remembered the look exactly. He knew that it was his fault his father died. It was his fault for not paying attention and becoming as strong as he could be. Shame shot through him, but he ignored it. He knew what he had to do now. He had to earn his honor back by becoming the best. That meant he had a lot of training to do. With that a smile crossed his face. He had to train his butt off before his Jounin was chosen. Only then could he prove to his father he was worth his time. He finished his water and nodded his head. And so his goal was set, his promise, his only destination, to be the best. With that he headed off toward the gate to train and begin his long journey. How did you find us?: I was pmed by someone | |
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| Subject: Re: Maraku Zenpachi (complete) Tue Sep 01, 2009 3:13 pm | |
| Genjutsu - Spoiler:
Name: Blurry Vision Rank: D Type: Genjutsu Element:N/A Description:The user quickly forms two hand seals which initiates the genjutsu, and the simple effect it does is make an opponent’s vision blurry enough to where it is difficult for them to discern anything. There vision has gone drunk. Effects With this, the opponent will have a harder time considering how to dodge an attack from projectiles and even attacks from the opponent. Presenting a weakpoint to exploit.
Name: Infinite Horizon Rank: D Type: Genjutsu Description: A very simple Genjutsu that relies on making the ninja think they’re moving their bodies, when in reality they are not. This is often used with other Genjustu in order to confuse the opponent, even if they should break the illusion.
Name: Kori Shinchuu no Jutsu - Sly Mind Affect Technique Rank: C Type: Genjutsu Duration: Until Kai is used. Description: Kori Shinchuu no Jutsu is a Genjutsu technique which causes the target to travel around in circles. If the ninja is unable to detect the illusion very quickly, they can become exhausted mentally and physically when they are unable to reach their desired target by traveling along the same path over and over.
Name: Evil Clone [Kagai Bunshin No Jutsu] Rank: C Type: Genjutsu Element:N/A Description: - A genjutsu that creates an evil 'bunshin' of a user, that can be placed into any type of bunshin. This bunshin will look like the opponent, and fight like the opponent it will have all of the user's physical characteristics. Confusing the opponent with an otherwise strange clone of themselves. Effects A technique which creates a clone that truly does not exist. The opponent will believe that person is there in all senses of reality. Feeling attacks that are laid upon them, and even trying to attack them. This is an attempt to further wear down the opponent.
Name: Vines of Deception [Sakujou Kibou No Jutsu] Rank: C Type: Genjutsu Element:N/A Description: A genjutsu where vines arise from the ground and wrap around the opponent and squeeze them. Making the user feel like there are vines that came up around them and are binding them to a specific area Effects A very simple jutsu that is related to Kanashibari type genjutsu. Making them feel as if it takes more effort in order to move their limbs, halting their movement slightly. Increases the strain of taijutsu by 5%
Name: Collapsing Lungs Skill [Botsuraku Gozou no Jutsu] Rank: B Type: Genjutsu Element: N/A Description: An illusion where a swirling whirlword goes around the opponent, acting as it makes the opponent believe their is no air around them. Making them feel as if they cannot breathe, and if held long enough the opponent can become unconcious from not breathing Effect: A technique that causes the opponent to truly believe they cannot breath due to no air around them. Causing them to try desperately to hold their breath. If they hold onto their breath for a total of 5 posts, they will pass out
Name: Jigyaku no Jutsu (Time Reversal Technique) Rank: A Type: Genjutsu Element: N/A Description: This technique puts the target in a state of reverse hypnosis, allowing them to remember details that they otherwise would not. The target will comply with interrogation, but seems to retain his or her personality while under hypnosis. For example, when the ANBU used this technique to bring back Naruto's memories about his conversations with Gennou, Naruto was more specific about the ramen he shared with the old man rather than their conversations, which the ANBU were asking about.
Name: Salvation Temple Skill [Nehan Shouja no Jutsu] Rank: A Type: Genjutsu Element: N/A Description: An illusion where feathers fall down from the sky, turning the area white, making all about fall asleep. It can be used to make the opponent fall asleep, and one must have a wxtreemly high genjutsu awareness in order to notice it and dispel it properly - Effect: Can cause everybody whom has lower genjutsu awareness to fall asleep
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| | | Kiza Hyuuga The Hokage
Posts : 1048 Join date : 2009-07-20
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| Subject: Re: Maraku Zenpachi (complete) Tue Sep 01, 2009 6:55 pm | |
| Must have all Custom Stuff approved before character is approved | |
| | | Maraku NR Genin
Posts : 98 Join date : 2009-08-31
Shinobi Infomation Rank:: Village Leader Chakra Bar: (350/350) Health: (400/400)
| Subject: Re: Maraku Zenpachi (complete) Tue Sep 01, 2009 7:03 pm | |
| just about everything I got on this app is custom
could u please just approve it all together | |
| | | Kiza Hyuuga The Hokage
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| Subject: Re: Maraku Zenpachi (complete) Wed Sep 02, 2009 6:37 pm | |
| You can only have 30 Jutsu to start with and only three S-Rank Jutsu | |
| | | Maraku NR Genin
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| | | Egress Uchiha The Mizukage
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| Subject: Re: Maraku Zenpachi (complete) Thu Sep 03, 2009 4:48 pm | |
| you have 4 more free jutsu slots.. do you want to use them? | |
| | | Dawn Neo Akatsuki Leader/Uchiha Clan Killer
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| Approved He has to learn them now | |
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