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Methias NR Genin
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| Subject: Methias Hyuuga Tue Sep 15, 2009 6:42 pm | |
| Name: Methias Hyuuga Age: 15 Rank: Genin, assuming i'm having to start as one. Gender: Male Clan: Hyuuga Appearance: - Spoiler:
Personality: Methias is much more sinister than the majority of the Hyuuga clan, his heart fixated on gaining a greater power than that of the Byakugan. He enjoys the thrill of battle, and considers himself superior to those around him, and for good reason, he is of the main house. He was considered a prodigy by those who raised him, his ability to master the arts second to none. This showed that he was incredibly intelligent, a feat that allows him to think logically at all times. He spends most of his time training to achieve greatness, and will stop at nothing to achieve his goals. In general, however, he is quite happy. When he's not training, he spends his time out in nature, admiring the beauty of the world around him. He is easy to befriend, even though he is more sinister than the majority. He speaks in a calm tone at all times, and even when he's joking he seems totally serious. This causes some people to quickly become confused, especially when he begins speaking about how the weak should be used as shields to protect the strong. In battle, he retains his calm personality, and continues being able to think logically at all times. He thinks about every move he makes, at such a pace that it is impossible to tell as an outsider. He uses the Byakugan effectively, in order to gain the sight advantage aswell as being able to manipulate the chakra points. This allows him to gain even more tactical advantages, such is the way his mind works. History: Born to the main Hyuuga family in Konohagakure, he was already expected for greatness due to his position in the family. His early life was filled with intens training, every day gradually increasing in difficulty in order to make him the greatest of his generation. For the first five years of his life, he was taught that emotions were meaningless, and that his only goal was to become the greatest Hyuuga that ever lived. These early days gave him the ego that he has now. The next few years were more of the same, and the training became harder as his Byakugan grew. At the age of ten, he was enlisted in the Kohana academy, instantly outgrowing those in his class. He was by far the most experienced and powerful Nin there, an amazing feat for someone so young. The majority of the class looked up to him, but few truly grew to detest him. These few would often try to gang up and try to injure the young Hyuuga, often being beaten to a pulp after trying such a stupid move. The year passed with him growing more and more feared, he himself had no boundries when it came to any form of challenge. He had to prove he was the greatest. However, shortly after the Genin exams (Which he passed with flying colours, of course), he fell for the most beautiful girl he had ever laid eye's on. His heart felt warm as she spoke to him for the first time, and this girl would be one of the other two members of his team. However, she was quickly taken away from him, his family deciding against it. Upon that day, his heart grew cold, and he turned his back on the main house. He eventually left the village, becoming a missing Nin. After three years had passed, he entered the Sound Village, also known as Otogakure, where he has remained til this day. He spends his time training, enjoying the scenery, and trying to befriend the locals, although his slight personality issue tends to make him withdrawn and distant to most. Village: Otogakure Rank: Genin, unless an grows to love this application and offers me a better rank . Element: Main: Wind - Sub: Lightning Nindo: None Equipment: Other than the clothing on his back, and the headband with the sound village sign upon it, he carries needle's in a small bag attached to his waist. Jutsu: - Spoiler:
Clan Jutsu
Byakugan Type: Doujutsu Rank: C Chakra Usage: 5 This is used by the Hyuuga Clan members allowing them to see 359 degrees around themselves. Only having one blindspot that is known only to them unless someone finds it in battle. It allows them to see all 361 chakra points in the chakra system.
Hakke Rokujuuyonshou - Eight Divination Signs, Thirty-Two Palms of the Hand Character Use: Hyuuga Clan Rank: D Range: Close (0m ~ 5m) Type: Taijutsu Note: Special Bloodline Technique Hakke Rokujuuyonshou is a Taijutsu technique unique to the Hyuuga bloodline. Hakke Rokujuuyonshou is a special technique passed down through the main family line. When an opponent is within the clan members divination field of attack, they can quickly begin their assault. The technique allows the clan member to use the Byakugan eye to see the inner chakra coils system. Using the Jyuuken style, they can force their chakra through their hands into the tenketsu of the opponent's body through 62 strikes. First the clan member will strike 2 times, then 4, 8, 16 and lastly 32. This damage forceably closes 32 tenketsu, stopping the chakra flow of the opponent. This then limits their opponents ability to use jutsu.
Hakkeshou Kaiten - Eight Divination Palms of the Hand, Heavenly Spin Character Use: Hyuuga Clan Rank: D Range: Close (0m ~ 5m) Type: Defense Chakra Use: 4 Note: Special Bloodline Technique Hakkeshou Kaiten is a Taijutsu technique unique to the Hyuuga bloodline using the Jyuuken. Kaiten is a special technique passed down through the main family line. Kaiten takes advantage of several of the unique abilities of the Byakugan eye. Byakugan gives the clan member an almost complete 360 degree view of their surroundings. This allows the member to see all angles of attack. If an attack is near, the clan member will release a large of amount of chakra from their tenketsu. The member then begins to spin like a top, creating a whirling vortex that can nullify almost any attack.
If an attack is near, the clan member will release a large of amount of chakra from their tenketsu. The member then begins to spin like a top, creating a whirling vortex that can nullify almost any attack.
Juuken Rank: - Type: Taijutsu Chakra Usage: None? Element: N/A The Gentle Fist style of combat is based on palm strikes and generally aims to damage the body's Chakra Pathway System, thus creating difficulty by inhibiting an opponent's use of chakra. To do this, the user will forcefully insert a small amount of their own chakra into an opponent's chakra pathway system. The chakra can the be used to rupture or divert chakra flow, preventing them from using jutsu. It can also be used to attack the opponent's internal organs, to which the chakra pathway system is closely tied. Even the slightest tap from this style can cause major damage, hence the name "gentle fist." Because the chakra pathway system is invisible, the Byakugan is required for this style to be used effectively. Since the Byakugan is unique to the Hyuga clan, it has become their signature style of combat.
Other Jutsu
E Rank Henge no Jutsu - Transformation Technique Viz Translation: Change Skill Character Use: General Skill Rank: E Range: - Chakra Use: 1 Type: Supplementary Henge no Jutsu is a ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.
Nawanuke no Jutsu (Rope Escape Technique) Type: Supplementary Range: Short 0-5m Rank: E CK usage: 1 A basic jutsu taught at the Konoha Ninja Academy, this jutsu allows a ninja to free themselves if they have been tied up.
Kawarimi no Jutsu (Body Replacement Technique) Type: Supplementary Range: Short 0-5m Rank: E CK usage: 1 This jutsu lets the user quickly switch places with another nearby object, such as a plant (normally a section of a log), an animal, or even another person within reach, leaving the opponent open to a counter-attack. Explosive tags can be attached to the replacement for an added surprise, which Sasuke has done twice in the anime. Fundamentally, all ninja know this technique. The anime has a number of other objects being used for this jutsu, such as a boulder, mud, a scarecrow, and even a large rolled-up carpet. These items are usually nowhere in sight, suggesting that they are merely gags meant to lighten up the situation and not an actual part of the jutsu. Additionally, the normal practice of switching places with a section of log is done in several places that have no such thing anywhere nearby.
Bunshin no Jutsu - Clone Technique Viz Translation: Art of the Doppelganger Character Use: General Skill Rank: E Range: - Chakra Use: 1 Type: Supplementary Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. The Bunshin technique creates a copy of the ninja without substance. The copy resembles the ninja in every way. This clone can function as a distraction or as means to confuse one's opponent. As soon the Bunshin gets attacked or comes into contact with an opponent, it will disperse.
Clan: Hyuuga RP sample: No one could deny that this was a God-Given gift. The dazzling golden glow that shimmered off of the sands of Otogakure in response to the brilliant sunlight was a sight that should bring its viewers to dumbstruck awe. The citizens moved on without a glance; their lives had known little else and they were accustomed, if not a little bored, with their sorroundings. Methias was not one of those Citizens. He breathed deep and showed a rare smile as he looked across his newfound home. His straight brown hair being caught in the wind, he closed his almost grey eye's, feeling the breeze caress against his face. Stretching his arms up into the air, he let out a yawn, the smile fading from his face as he did. As his eye's opened, he gazed into the distance, letting his hands shift into the pockets. Looking downwards, his chin gently rested on the headband that was wrapped around his neck, the sound symbol engraved into the metal plate. Another gust of wind moved across him as he released his Byakugan, his eye's growing colorless, his veins bulging around his eye's. His mind remained blank, his hands moved from his pockets to his front, he took on the position of Juuken. Infront of him stood a tree, a single tree, the tallest in the village. Pushing off of his back foot, he sped towards it, thrusting his right hand into the bark. A loud crashing bang struck through the ears of all onlookers, Methias' handprint indented within the tree. A few even gasped in amazement. " Is this all it really takes to amuse these people... After four years, I guess even I expected them to be stronger than they are...Most are but weak and foolish beings... It disgusts me.." He thought to himself, before his Byakugan faded yet again. Moving his hands back to his pockets, he turned his back to the tree, walking away, leaving the sight of dumbstruck villagers. How did you find us?: -
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| | | HawkEyesMihawk The Raikage
Posts : 123 Join date : 2009-08-30 Age : 33 Location : Somewhere over the rainbow
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| Subject: Re: Methias Hyuuga Tue Sep 15, 2009 6:52 pm | |
| Expand upon the jutsu, use the template. The rest is ok. Also pick a lower age for your genin like 10-15 is the usual age. | |
| | | Methias NR Genin
Posts : 31 Join date : 2009-09-15
| Subject: Re: Methias Hyuuga Tue Sep 15, 2009 7:03 pm | |
| Well, I truly see no real reason to be a young age, In character, if my character has never taken the Chuunin exams, how can age show anything on the rank? ^^ I'll edit the age to 15, but yeah, my point still stands xP.
Anyway, edited the Jutsu section and age, time for a recheck? ^^ | |
| | | HawkEyesMihawk The Raikage
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| Subject: Re: Methias Hyuuga Tue Sep 15, 2009 7:05 pm | |
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| | | Kiza Hyuuga The Hokage
Posts : 1048 Join date : 2009-07-20
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| Subject: Re: Methias Hyuuga Tue Sep 15, 2009 7:53 pm | |
| Use the Hyuuga Jutsu from the Hyuuga Clan Jutsu topic so it is correct. Also you get 6 E-Rank, 2 D-Rank, and 1 C-Rank Jutsu. | |
| | | Methias NR Genin
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| Subject: Re: Methias Hyuuga Tue Sep 15, 2009 8:17 pm | |
| Couple of issues..
1.) Juuken is missing from the Jutsu list. Even though you've added an alternative there, the alternative wouldn't quite work in closing off the opponents chakra points. It's too spread and more like Goken, while Juuken is more direct and focused. You only have to watch Neji fight to see where i'm coming from with this.
Another issue with "Tiger Fist" is that you say it deals more damage than Gentle, but that really isn't possible, seeing as gentle is REQUIRED to use most, if not all of a Hyuuga's techniques.
2.) Eight Trigrams Thirty-Two palms is a cannon technique. It should be there, but it's not, so I used my natural instinct to determine the chakra usage etc. You should really add both Jyuuken and this to the Jutsu list..
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Anywho, going to add more Jutsu to the list, 2 secs.
(This wasn't an attempt to be rude at all, it's just me trying to offer a helping hand, hope it doesn't leave a bad impression ^^) | |
| | | Kiza Hyuuga The Hokage
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| Subject: Re: Methias Hyuuga Wed Sep 16, 2009 6:55 pm | |
| 1.)Jyuuken isn't needed to be added and if you want it added pm the info in the correct format.
*Custom Jutsu made by Nami for Hyuuga Clan
2.) Eight Trigrams Thirty-Two palms is on the list | |
| | | Methias NR Genin
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| Subject: Re: Methias Hyuuga Wed Sep 16, 2009 7:16 pm | |
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| | | Kiza Hyuuga The Hokage
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| Subject: Re: Methias Hyuuga Wed Sep 16, 2009 7:37 pm | |
| 1.)Exactly since's it's their fighting style and we don't have a fighting styles section all Hyuuga automatically are familiar with it unless wanting to be taught.
2.) Well I guess it wasn't brought up before.
It's fine there's no hard feelings trust me lol. This is my job | |
| | | Methias NR Genin
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| Subject: Re: Methias Hyuuga Wed Sep 16, 2009 8:23 pm | |
| Well, anyway, i've done everything that you've asked of me ^^. - The only issue here is currently Juuken, which is there simply to explain it, and is rankless, and that 8t32p isn't written up yet. If you want to edit some of what I've wrote and put it into the Hyuuga Jutsu list, go ahead xP.
(I'm assuming that the Byakugan counts as the C-Rank Jutsu i'm allowed thus is my reasoning for making 8t32p instead of 8t64p) | |
| | | Kiza Hyuuga The Hokage
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| Subject: Re: Methias Hyuuga Thu Sep 17, 2009 1:53 pm | |
| Yes Byakugan does count and I'll make it now. | |
| | | Methias NR Genin
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| Subject: Re: Methias Hyuuga Thu Sep 17, 2009 3:23 pm | |
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| | | Kiza Hyuuga The Hokage
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| Subject: Re: Methias Hyuuga Thu Sep 17, 2009 3:28 pm | |
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