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kyouto NR Genin
Posts : 10 Join date : 2009-08-06 Age : 27
Shinobi Infomation Rank:: Chakra Bar: (0/0) Health: (0/0)
| Subject: sokei clan Fri Aug 07, 2009 9:30 pm | |
| name:sokei kekkai genkai:the ability to mutate their body into a black & red biomass which can form into almost anything clan history:has had an war with the sentinals since the beginning of time native village:N/A clans enemy:the sentinals clans alliance:N/A clan symbol:double red helix (dna strand) clan weapon:themselves clan jutsus:mutate their biomass into a 6-foot blade,razor sharp claws,spiked tentacle/whip,dense club-like hammerfists.a shield the size of a door,full body biomass armor.biomass ice skates form on the bottom of their feet allowing them to skate flat surfaces.can drain only chakra & biomass from "feeding" on living beings(cannot absorb memories,experience, or physical appearence,if you saw what carnage did to gwen stacy on some issue of ultimate spiderman thats basicly what happens) clan weakness:electricity clan drawback:consumes an average amount of chakra & biomass
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Kiza Hyuuga The Hokage
Posts : 1048 Join date : 2009-07-20
Shinobi Infomation Rank:: Konaha Chuunin Chakra Bar: (95/95) Health: (125/125)
| Subject: Re: sokei clan Fri Aug 07, 2009 10:55 pm | |
| I know this would be a cool clan to have but this is Naruto not Prototype. You can't "absorb the memories,experience,biomass & physical form of enemies through absorbtion" The rest seems kinda ok. I'll let Dawn check it out. | |
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kyouto NR Genin
Posts : 10 Join date : 2009-08-06 Age : 27
Shinobi Infomation Rank:: Chakra Bar: (0/0) Health: (0/0)
| Subject: Re: sokei clan Fri Aug 07, 2009 11:54 pm | |
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kyouto NR Genin
Posts : 10 Join date : 2009-08-06 Age : 27
Shinobi Infomation Rank:: Chakra Bar: (0/0) Health: (0/0)
| Subject: Re: sokei clan Sat Aug 08, 2009 12:06 am | |
| hey wait a second why am i listening to you,ur a genin | |
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kyouto NR Genin
Posts : 10 Join date : 2009-08-06 Age : 27
Shinobi Infomation Rank:: Chakra Bar: (0/0) Health: (0/0)
| Subject: Re: sokei clan Sat Aug 08, 2009 9:51 am | |
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Kiza Hyuuga The Hokage
Posts : 1048 Join date : 2009-07-20
Shinobi Infomation Rank:: Konaha Chuunin Chakra Bar: (95/95) Health: (125/125)
| Subject: Re: sokei clan Sat Aug 08, 2009 12:48 pm | |
| Lmao. It's fine I won't get you in any trouble you didn't know but all I ask is that you have a drawback and take out the one thing and the clan can be approved. | |
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kyouto NR Genin
Posts : 10 Join date : 2009-08-06 Age : 27
Shinobi Infomation Rank:: Chakra Bar: (0/0) Health: (0/0)
| Subject: Re: sokei clan Sun Aug 09, 2009 12:04 pm | |
| did you not read the clan weakness? | |
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Kiza Hyuuga The Hokage
Posts : 1048 Join date : 2009-07-20
Shinobi Infomation Rank:: Konaha Chuunin Chakra Bar: (95/95) Health: (125/125)
| Subject: Re: sokei clan Sun Aug 09, 2009 1:19 pm | |
| That's a weakness not a drawback. I meant like how much chakra does it take away to perform and maintain your abilities when used. | |
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kyouto NR Genin
Posts : 10 Join date : 2009-08-06 Age : 27
Shinobi Infomation Rank:: Chakra Bar: (0/0) Health: (0/0)
| Subject: Re: sokei clan Sun Aug 09, 2009 8:41 pm | |
| i made changes but i also had to change the absorbing thing,im running out of ideas here | |
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Kiza Hyuuga The Hokage
Posts : 1048 Join date : 2009-07-20
Shinobi Infomation Rank:: Konaha Chuunin Chakra Bar: (95/95) Health: (125/125)
| Subject: Re: sokei clan Sun Aug 09, 2009 8:48 pm | |
| Ok now you just need Dawn's approval and things are fine. | |
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Dawn Neo Akatsuki Leader/Uchiha Clan Killer
Posts : 426 Join date : 2009-06-19 Age : 38
Shinobi Infomation Rank:: Konohagakure Kage ( Hokage ) Chakra Bar: (260/260) Health: (400/400)
| Subject: Re: sokei clan Sun Aug 09, 2009 9:14 pm | |
| Approved
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