Storyline and Plot Idea Discussion

Here we're all to post ideas or suggestions for our site's storyline/plot, we have so far:

Characters:
12 Main Characters
Dawn Uchiha - Hokage
Kiza Hyuuga - Hokage's Pupil(Leaf Genin)
((Second Hokage Pupil))
((Third Hokage Pupil))
Egress Uchiha - Mizukage
Koga Kinoske - Mizukage's Pupil(Mist Genin)
Shikamatsu Hatake - Mizukage's Pupil(Mist Genin)
((Third Mizukage Pupil))
Cornelio Uchiha - Kazekage
((First Kazekage Pupil))
((Second Kazekage Pupil))
((Third Kazekage Pupil))
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[Kiza is in charge of writing out the full storyline]


Although it's best to leave space for other thing as well, here're some sketches of my ideas:

Antagonists:
Main Villian:
Main Villian group: Neo-Akatsuki
Main Villian's Pupil:
Villian:
Villian:
Villian:

Protaganists:

Main Hero:
Main Hero Group & Village:
Main Hero's Pupil:
Hero:
Hero:
Hero:

Plot Sketch: Arising from the depths of death, the long-dead feared criminal organization was reborn and became known as Neo-Akatsuki! This time, their leader (Main Antagonist's Name) has collected certain shinobi, S-rank Missing Ninjas, from all over the Shinobi World to band together and create the world's elite mercenary group. As they gain money to assist themselves to do this, the money is always funded to the members. However, Neo-Akatsuki also had another goal, the most major of all. As the old Akatsuki were to capture jinchuruki and collect bijuu, all of those bijuu died out as the statue crumbles away. Now, Neo-Akatsuki are to capture curse marks, selected seals that grants surpreme ninja superhuman abilities and use all of the Juinjutsu to create an unknown dangerous weapon. As their members scatter across the globe to find these curse marks, the (Main Hero Group/Village) and (Main Hero) have heard about this Neo-Akatsuki but are unware of their true motives. Cautious, they began to send out unique and elite ninja from the Five Nations to find out what Neo-Akatsuki are after and to stop any illegal means, even if it means killing off their members. As these two forces collide to protect their dreams and to judge strength, only one will survive to overcome the another and change the World of Shinobi... forever. [Incompleted as it's a litle bleak]

Yeah I shall take all ideas into consideration as I create the storyline.

An idea for the name and details of the Main Hero Group/Organization:

Organization Name: "Senkensha" [Literally Meaning: The Seers or The Wizards]

Details: Senkensha is a secret hidden organization created in an effort to prevent the uprising of certain factions that would aim to bring destruction to the world, it was created by the Five Great Nations. The group was created after a series of incidents in which a number of Villages suffered great loses. Some of the Damages took a toll on the Villages and their Military powers and abilities to deal with these factions. Of one the most Notorious faction to ever cause trouble for the 5 Great Nations were important events such as the 4th Great Ninja World War or Neo-Akatsuki. A band of Missing Ninjas that killed and destroyed everything that stood in the way of their goals. Although the relationship between the 5 Great Nations was at an all time low they all recognize that something needed to be done about these issues.

Normally the Villages would rely on their own Military power, such as their ANBU, Seven Swordsmen, etc. But the creation of the Seers was to have a group of Ninjas representing their nations that was not only extremely skilled and expierenced but those that are even above the system and would do anything to ensure that no harm came to their respective countries. The 5 Great Nations however treats the Seers as an unknown entity and so their existence will never be acknowledge in order keep this group a secret. The Members of this Faction are all highly skilled and well trained Ninjas that could even bring destruction to the 5 Nations themselves. However they all swore an oath to always protect and defend against any uprising that would seek to disturb the peace. The Seers would become their own little organization of "Hunter Nins" that tried keeping the peace and maintaining a healthy Balance between good and evil in the world. They're all selected elite shinobi with immense chakra levels and possess unusual powers.

They're send on dangerous missions to kill off any evil that comes to play and even any good that has become too much.
There is also a council that oversees the operations of this group. And it is to only them that the members of the Seers answer. The Seers all believe that once you are deemed to be a threat to maintaining the peace, then you will be treated as an enemy. They were designated to eliminate any war possible and to stable The nations as well as minor villages. Anyone that will upset the balance will be hunted and killed and information of Senkensha is kept secret all around the globe. Seers are also taught secret arts and advanced techniques to hunt and assasinate their enemies.

Objective: Goals: Maintaining the Balance between good and evil by forsaking all others even if it means killing their own Kin in order to keep the peace.

Appereance Features/Other Information: Senkensha members often wear headbands with the Kanji sign of Peace or Balance. . They might wear cloaks like:

To better maintain secrecy and security not just the group but the allied villages as well, the members of Senkensha are known as a "Yogensha" ]Literally Meaning: Prophet]

Leader: Usually the Main Hero or one of the 3 Heroes.

What do they have they to do with anything in the storyline. We aren't making things up for the storyline I'm writing about the things that actually happened on the site for other people to go over and review things of the past. So the only group will be the Neo-Akatsuki and if Dawn approves of adding this group they may be in it later on when the Neo-Akatsuki come into play.

............., what the Main Hero Group does. Basically in order to keep the balance, they're practically the enemies of Neo-Akatsuki, the two forces clashing together as Neo-Akatsuki will be disrupting the peace out for the collection of curse marks...

Yeah but it's not an actually group just one you made up. So if it gets approved by Dawn then I'll add the idea. I was just saying people should give me ideas of current things not future ones.

The main hero group is the five main villages

Like I thought no new groups.

there isnt no new groups

Kura: Uhmmm....I'll draw it out and help write ^^' I'm already a manga artist for another site and making my own story... And haichu is forcing me toteyto get a book I made published...-.-'
Haichu: damn strait you better get that book published..oh btw 135 people want fanfiction I wrote what they want, they say they'll pay you 50 for everythin if it's bounded andstuff and another 50 for illustrations =D
Kura: -.-' 135?! Haichu...stop findig people!! I'm already getting 3 hours of sleep because of trying to do 17 freaking things!!! I know you wantto help but lay low till wednesday I should have majority of the stuff done okay?
Haichu: fine but I get to get to make illustrations for your 4th book k?
Kura: fine

Kura: ohh one last thing, some of my friends and I could help develop the storyline..if that's okay...readig through I have a somewha plan storyline developed...I'm just on my iPod though so when I get on my computer I'll typenit up if that's okay...

It's not something you make if you read it you could easily see I'm writing it after things happen.

kiza is right but you can draw what has happened so far

Kura: I know, I've done a bunch of writing -.-' I went through bunch of topics to write the story on what happened on wotn and with over 3100 people it was a pain reading. Everything but I got the storyline and stuff done

so all the canon chars are dead? >.<

Yeah no Cannons

how about Canon clones? o.o

Stop spamming or I will ban you.

Canon clones? Well Bunshinjutsu is allowed, but I don't believe any replication of any canon names. You can use the same last name but...

Probably...that's what happened on wotn now there's the shadow, ice and storm illage and the remaining canon villages are mist and sand they alsoreently addedthe migrant sand village..but yeah pretty interssti at times

Yes, which also reminds me. What is our timeline? Would it be four decades after the Shippuden timeline or..?

Not sure.

geez didn't plan much? hnm....at least wotn got the timeline XD they just needed the artists to get it done

Does how long afterwards really matter anyways?

I can be indeed crucial to the current storyline and good to know to decide current technology and items that currently exist. But since this would be after the destruction of the original Akatsuki, this would be (amount of years) after Pain's Invasion (starting from there) or Post-Naruto in an alter-universe?