Kuroi E-su {Finished}

Name: Kuroi E-su Kugutsu

Age: 14

Rank: Kage, S-rank Medic Ninja

Gender: Male

Clan: Kugutsu

Appearance: Avi pic... working on it

Personality: He is very energetic. He has mad love for his family and friends. He absolutely hates being alone. Whatever needs to be done he's happy to do (unless it's really stupid). He always willing to do something for a friend. Kor pretty much has an "I don't care" attitude about most things. His main thought on life is that it has it's ups and downs. He isn't very good with people on certain cases. He may not like many people, but he does get along with some.

He absolutely hates fake people. He thinks that if you can't be 100% honest then you don't need to be around on the earth. He will kill or severly hurt anyone that gets in his way, or he will at least try. If he notices that someone is acting fake he will turn from them. He make look sad or upset but he doesn't get mad. He actually has a smile on in the inside.

History:
Academy Arc: Kor never paid much attention to the teacher or what he said. Everyday he would get in trouble for not paying attention. Kor was always zoning out like there wasn't any point to school at all. He was forced to stay after at the academy almost everyday. He loved the alone time though.

When it was time for the big Clone test everyone thought Kor was going to fail. He was last in line for the test. Everybody was doing good. The next thing you know it was Kor's turn to try for Gennin. His teacher and three other chuunin were there to examine him.

The examiners had no hope in Kor passing, so they were going to leave. Kor told them to wait and when they looked at him, Kor performed Shadow Clone jutsu. He created three successful clones. They gave him his headband and he walked out without saying a word. When he walked out everyone was surprised.

Gennin Arc: Kor had got into a group with one of the smartest girls in his class. The other was a puppet prodigy. When they met each other, Kor knew there was going to be trouble. Kor didn't care very much for them they were just there to him. He shook his head and waited for their sensei.

They had waited there for at least two hours. The girl told them her name, it was Jean. The guy told them that his name was Shiranai. As they got more acquainted their Sensei had came. He introduced himself to the team. He didn't give them a name but he told them that they will call him Sensei.

Kor and his squad immediatly got a mission. They did ten D-Rank, five C-Rank, and three B-Rank missions. Each one of them were successful. Shiranai was help with the attacks and Jean was good at strategizing. They made a great team.

Chuunin Exams: After all of their missions it was time for the chuunin exams. They all did good on the written exams except for Kor. He didn't do anything on it. He just wrote his name and then took a nap. Luckily the way that the test was set up he didn't really have to do anything.

After all of that they had to go through the forest of death. They were assigned a scroll, the heaven scroll, and they had to get the earth scroll. They killed a group for the scroll they needed and headed to the tower in the center of the forest. They were the first to get there. They sat there and waited.

Kor's first match was easy. They barely put up a fight. It took him two punches and a fire style jutsu to defeat them. Kor only kills if it needs to be done, so he tried not to kill his opponent. He went to the second round no problem.

It was the third stage and second round. He had to be more stragetical. His next opponent was strong and smart so he had to be the same. Luckily he made it past that round. He was hurt but he made it past the round.

There was eight gennin left and Kor wasn't going to let anybody get in the way. The next person he had to fight was Jean. She was smart but Kor could beat her easily. It took more chakra out of him then what he thought but she was defeated. The next genin he faced had given up before the match even started.

The last match was between Kor and Shiranai. They were matched with strength and smarts. Shiranai was more ready for the match than Kor. Kor ended up losing the match but because of the way he fought in the previous battles he was made a chuunin. From then Kor and Shiranai became enemies

Village: Getsugakure

Rank: Kage

element:Fire and Earth

Nindo: If you can't do anything good for yourself, why do good for others?

Equipment: puppet, two katanas, 10 kunai, 10 shuriken, two giant shuriken, ten feet of metal wire

Jutsu:
Name: Jibaku Fuda: Kassei (Exploding Tag: Activate)
Type: Ninjutsu
Chakra Usage: 1
Element: none
Description: Utilizing chakra, the user is able to activate the explosion mechanism of a distant bomb tag. The exploding tags that the Third Hokage used were different than the usual bomb tags, being yellow in color instead of white with a red border

Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu (Body Replacement Technique)
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Chakra Usage: 1
Element: none
Description: This jutsu lets the user quickly switch places with another nearby object, such as a plant (normally a section of a log), an animal, or even another person within reach, leaving the opponent open to a counter-attack. Explosive tags can be attached to the replacement for an added surprise, which Sasuke has done twice in the anime. Fundamentally, all ninja know this technique.
The anime has a number of other objects being used for this jutsu, such as a boulder, mud, a scarecrow, and even a large rolled-up carpet. These items are usually nowhere in sight, suggesting that they are merely gags meant to lighten up the situation and not an actual part of the jutsu. Additionally, the normal practice of switching places with a section of log is done in several places that have no such thing anywhere nearby.

Name: Henge no Jutsu - Transformation Technique
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Chakra Usage: 1
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.

Name: Magen: Narakumi no Jutsu (Demonic Illusion: Hell Viewing Technique)
Rank: D
Type: Genjutsu
Chakra Usage: 3
Description: This jutsu causes the target to see a horrifying vision. First, an imaginary circle of leaves will spin around and envelop the target, falling away shortly after. After a short period, the illusion will begin. This is to make the illusion more convincing, since the user will likely have moved before the illusion sets in.

Name: Kasumi Jusha no Jutsu (Mist Servant Technique)
Rank: D
Type: Genjutsu
Chakra Usage: 4 per clone
Description: This jutsu creates clones that phase in and out of the ground as if they were made of a blackish, oil-like liquid. When attacked, the clones regenerate themselves. The clones can be controlled to make it seem as if they're throwing kunai. The user can then time their attacks with those of the clones.

Name: Shunshin no Jutsu (Body Flicker Technique)
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Chakra Usage: 4
Description: This jutsu is a high-speed movement technique, allowing a ninja to move short distances at an almost untraceable speed. To an observer, it appears as if the user has teleported. A puff of smoke is occasionally used to disguise the user's movements. It is accomplished by using chakra to temporarily boost the user's reflexes. The amount of chakra required depends on the overall distance between the user and their intended destination. Shisui Uchiha, one of the most talented Uchiha, was feared as "Shisui of the Body Flicker" ("Shunshin no Shisui"), likely referring to this technique. The Body Flicker technique has various variations among the different hidden villages, all of which involve some extra element aside from the movement itself. The extra element is usually some sort of substance used to distract the opponent, such as leaves or sand. Gaara, for instance, uses the "Sand Body Flicker" (Suna-Shunshin), which uses sand to cover his movements. Other varieties include the "Mist Body Flicker" (Kiri-Shunshin), "Water Body Flicker" (Mizu-Shunshin), and "Leaf Body Flicker" (Konoha-Shunshin).

Name: Dynamic Entry (Dainamikku Entorii)
Rank: D
Type: Taijutsu
Description: Dynamic Entry is a taijutsu technique used by Maito Gai. Gai will throw a kunai to distract his targets attention, he will then use his speed and agility to quickly approach and attack his opponent from their blind side.

Name: Hayabusa Otoshi - Peregrine Falcon Drop
Rank: D
Type: Taijutsu
Description: Hayabusa Otoshi is a Taijutsu technique used by Uchiha Sasuke. While at an elevated position, Sasuke will grab his opponent from behind. Firmly locking himself to their back, he will lock his ankles to their neck to get their body rigid. He will then plant them head first into the ground. Essentially a belly to back piledriver, the move can provide a great concussion to his opponent's head.

Name: Kage Buyo (Shadow Dancing Leaf)
Rank: C
Type: Taijutsu
Description: While the target is airborne, the user jumps in such a way as to appear below the target while following a similar trajectory through the air. Since the victim is airborne, he is in a vulnerable position to a more damaging attack.

Name:Magen: Kokoni Arazu no Jutsu (Demonic Illusion: False Surroundings Technique)
Rank: C
Type: Genjutsu
Chakra Usage: 4
Description: This jutsu changes the appearance of a nearby object or area.

Name:Healing Wave Technique (Chiyu Shuuha no Jutsu)
Rank: C
Type: Healing Ninjutsu
Chakra Usage: 5
Description: While the healing hand technique is the choice of most medical ninja, sometimes the patient simply can't be gotten to in time to be healed. In those instances, this technique is used to heal them from afar. This jutsu focuses chakra into the hands of the user and then projects it towards the patient. While this jutsu is just as efficient at healing as the healing hands technique, this jutsu does cost considerably more chakra.

Name: Kugutsu no Jutsu (Puppet Technique)
Rank: C
Type: Offensive, Defensive, Supplementary, Short to mid-range (0-10m)
Chakra Usage: 4 To Activate, 2 per turn
Description: This jutsu uses strings of chakra to control puppets like marionettes. Any number of chakra strings can be used to control a puppet, but users with more skill can use fewer strings per puppet. Both Chiyo and Sasori demonstrated the ability to control entire puppets perfectly using just one string. While most puppeteers would normally be able to control ten puppets at most (one per finger), Sasori's self-modification allowed him to control up to one hundred puppets at a time.

Apart from being used to control marionettes, the chakra strings can be attached to other objects, allowing the user to control, or at the very least disrupt, other things. In one instance, Kankuro uses chakra strings to trip Naruto Uzumaki when they first meet. In another, Chiyo uses chakra strings to control a person like a puppet.

This technique has few weaknesses: since the puppeteer uses his or her hands to manipulate the puppets, if the hands are disabled, then the technique could be neutralized. Also, while controlling the doll, the user is wide open if the opponent bypasses the puppet. For this reason, puppeteers avoid battle, relying almost exclusively on their puppets instead.

Name:Sōshūjin (Manipulating Attack Blades)
Rank: C
Type: Offensive, Short to mid-range (0-10m)
Chakra Usage: 4
Description: The user makes kunai knives float in mid-air as he or she uses chakra to control them and direct them to an opponent. Chiyo does something similar by using the strings generated for the Puppet Technique to control discarded puppet weapons for herself.

Name:Ryuuka no Jutsu - Dragon Fire Technique
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Chakra Usage: 5
Element: Fire
Description: Katon • Goukakyuu no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. The ninja does the necessary hand seals, draws chakra from their mouth into their chest and them immediately exhales it. They then blow a stream of fire which erupts into a large sphere of flames. To better manage the flames the ninja will bring their hand to their mouth to control it. Katon jutsu such as this are seen as a rite of passage into adulthood for Uchiha clan members. Once the member can manipulate fire, they are finally recognized as no longer being a child.

Name:Housenka no Jutsu - Mythical Fire Phoenix Technique
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Chakra Usage: 4
Element: Fire
Description: Katon • Housenka no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. The ninja does the necessary hand seals and then emits a series of small fire balls. The ninja can also hurl a projectile which is covered in these same flames. To the opponent the attack appears to be only the balls of flame, they do not see the hidden threat within the flames. Meaning that even if the flames are put out, the projectiles still converge on the target. The flames can be used to cover different projectiles like shuriken or kunai.

Name: Tsuchi Bunshin no Jutsu (Earth Clone Technique)
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu, Supplementary
Chakra Usage: 5 per Clone
Element: Earth
Description: This jutsu creates one or more identical copies of the user out of mud. Oddly, there does not need to be mud nearby for the technique to be performed. The clones are physically real and can perform jutsu, but will turn back into mud when enough damage has been done.

Name: Earth Prison Technique
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu, Supplementary
Chakra Usage: 5
Element: Earth
Description: This jutsu is used to trap a victim inside a dome of earth. The only thing is this dome can be penetrated by steady drilling or extremely strong impact. After creating the dome the user can insert their hands in the original place they stuck their hands to create the Dome to suck the chakra out of the targets inside the Dome.

Name: Doton: Doryu Taiga (Earth Release: Earth Flow River)
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu, Supplementary and Offensive
Chakra Usage: 4
Element: Earth
Description: This jutsu forms a rapid river of mud on the ground beneath an opponent to help trap or prepare for a second jutsu following it

Name: Doton: Doryudan (Earth Release: Earth Dragon Bullet)
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu, Offensive
Chakra Usage: 6
Element: Earth
Description: Used in conjunction with Earth Release: Earth Flow River, this jutsu creates a likeness of a dragon's head that launches mud balls from its mouth at an opponent.

Name: Dai Endan - Great Fireball
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu, Attack
Chakra Usage: 6
Element: Fire
Description: Dai Endan is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire element. Jiraiya will first gather the fire into his mouth and then spew a giant breath of fire constantly at his opponent.

Name: Gouryuuka no Jutsu - Great Dragon Fire Technique
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Chakra Usage: 7
Element: Fire
Description: Katon • Gouryuuka no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. After forming the needed hand seals, the ninja will expel dragon head fireballs at their opponent. These powerful fireballs can punch through concrete.

Name: Haisekisho - Ash Product Burning
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Chakra Usage: 6
Element: Fire
Description: Katon • Unlike other fire-based jutsu, this jutsu allows the user to breathe out a cloud of superheated ash capable of causing third-degree burns. Because it is ash and not flame, the ash remains in the air around the target, and therefore remains potent for a longer period.

Name:Magen: Jubaku Satsu (Demonic Illusion: Tree Bind Death)
Rank: B
Type: Genjutsu
Chakra Usage: 6
Description: With this jutsu, the user can make themselves disappear, allowing them to approach their target unnoticed. Once completed, a tree and roots will grow at the target's feet and restrict their movements. Once the opponent believes that they are captured, the user can then appear above their opponent from the tree's trunk and kill the target. In the Kurama clan filler arc of the anime, this jutsu seems to be quite versatile, with a wide range of variations on the standard nature theme. In addition to the disappearing and tree-growing effects of the jutsu, the user can produce flowers, seedpods, vines and multiple trees.

Name: Dokukiri Jigoku: Baribari Hyaku Renpatsu (Poison Mist Hell: Hundred Continuous Hell)
Rank:B
Type: Ninjutsu
Chakra Usage: 6
Description: By using his Puppet Technique, Kankuro moves Karasu and Kuroari into position around his target. Karasu launches poison mist at the opponent, surrounding them with gas. When their vision is blocked, both the puppets will launch needles from their arms at their victim.

Name: Jigyaku no Jutsu (Time Reversal Technique)
Rank: A
Type: Genjutsu
Chakra Usage: 8
Description: This technique puts the target in a state of reverse hypnosis, allowing them to remember details that they otherwise would not. The target will comply with interrogation, but seems to retain his or her personality while under hypnosis. For example, when the ANBU used this technique to bring back Naruto's memories about his conversations with Gennou, Naruto was more specific about the ramen he shared with the old man rather than their conversations, which the ANBU were asking about.

Name:Kokuangyo no Jutsu (Bringer-of-Darkness Technique)
Rank: A
Type: Genjutsu
Chakra Usage: 9
Description: This jutsu makes the target think that they are surrounded by total darkness, allowing the user to attack unseen.

Name: Kasumi Engo no Jutsu - Covering Mist Technique
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Chakra Usage: 8
Description: This jutsu allows the user to create and blow a flammable gas from their lungs. Once it comes in contact with fire or sparks, the gas ignites into a large fireball. Kagero used this technique while disguised as Kabuto Yakushi.

Name: Shiro Higi: Jukki Chikamatsu no Shū (White Secret Technique: Ten Puppet Collection of Chikamatsu)
Rank: S
Type: Offensive, Defensive, Supplementary, All ranges
Chakra Usage: To activate 40, 20 per turn
Description: These ten puppets were created by the inventor of the Puppet Technique, Monzaemon Chikamatsu. They later came into Chiyo's possession. To use the puppets, Chiyo first released them from their carrying scroll and then controlled each with a chakra string connected to one of her ten fingers. This ability to control ten puppets at once earned Chiyo great fame.
Puppets
Chiyo's Ten Puppet Collection of Chikamatsu

The puppets are apparently very powerful, as Chiyo claimed that she had destroyed a castle with them, and that afterwards she had sworn to never use them again. They were capable of countering Sasori's Red Secret Technique: Performance of a Hundred Puppets, due in great part to their ability to work together. Donned in white coats, each of the puppets have different sets of skills and weapons. The puppets and their skills are listed below, numbered for ease of reference.

1. This puppet somewhat resembled an "oni" (demon). Although it possessed no weapons, its striking power was immense. This puppet primarily used its large fists as a means to fend off attackers. It always kept closer to Chiyo in case it was needed as defense.
2. This puppet was able to extend its arms to form a sort of cage, where it would then launch bombs from its mouth. Since the explosion was accurate and very small, it dealt a great amount of damage to enemies whilst not damaging the cage. This puppet was also proficient at taijutsu.
3. This puppet had one eye, and was capable of releasing an orb from its mouth used for the Sealing Technique: Lion Closing Roar.
4. This puppet had spiky hair, and held the mark of Buddha in its mouth which activated Three Buddhist Treasures Vacuum Destruction technique when used in conjunction with puppets #6 and #8. Three Buddhist Treasures Vacuum Destruction is a technique where puppets #4, #6, and #8 formed a pyramid with a small space at the center. Prior to activation, Chiyo and the three puppets would form a seal that would then open a powerful vacuum that would suck in anything in front of the technique. However, the vacuum was prone to overloading, thus leaving the three puppets vulnerable.
5. A red puppet that works together with puppet #9. It is able to lift its face to reveal a spinning orb with four chakra blades. Since these blades are made of chakra and spin rapidly, even a scrape can prove deadly.
6. This puppet held an "Acts" seal in its mouth, and worked with puppets #4 and #8 to activate Three Buddhist Treasures Vacuum Destruction technique.
7. This puppet resembled a girl with red hair tied into buns. It wielded two large swords that were capable of cleaving through enemies with ease, although the sheer magnitude of the weapons reduced the puppet's dexterity. Puppet #7 was the main attacker, and could fend off even the strongest of enemies at an alarming rate.
8. This puppet held the "Priest" seal, and worked in conjunction with puppets #4 and #6 to activate Three Buddhist Treasures Vacuum Destruction.
9. A puppet with long black hair. It works in conjunction with puppet #5. Puppet #9 is able to extend its hand via a chain link before connecting with puppet #5 to hurl it around, thus being able to slice mid-ranged to close-ranged targets quickly and effectively. However, if #9 were to be destroyed, #5 would become vulnerable.
10. A bald puppet with large holes in its skull. This puppet's hidden weapons are the long extending cords coiled in its skull that can pierce numerous enemies at a time. Since the range is very long, it can pierce distant targets without even getting close. Also, it is able to latch onto opponents with its cords and then crumble them slowly. Puppet #10 can also use its hands and legs to fight, but lacks physical power.

Only one person can have this jutsu at this game. The one person who holds these 10 puppets.

Name:Hitokugutsu (Human Puppets)
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Chakra Usage: 200
Description: A technique developed by Sasori of the Red Sand, this allows him to create puppets from human corpses. As Sasori was the only person to know how to create human puppets, this technique became lost forever when he died.

By removing the internal organs of a foe and preserving the body to prevent decomposition, as well as adding weapons and defenses, Sasori can make powerful human puppets. These puppets are different from normal ones, as they retain their use of chakra and any Kekkei Genkai that the human host once had. Sasori developed this during his time in Sunagakure, and he claims to have 298 of them, using 103 in his battle with Sakura and Chiyo.

This body conversion method can also be used on still living, as Sasori turned himself into a puppet while still maintaining his life and mind.

One of Sasori's most powerful techniques revolving around the Human Puppets is the Red Secret Technique: Performance of a Hundred Puppets, which, with his own puppet body modifications, allows him to control one hundred human puppets, a feat impossible for even the most elite puppet users. Though they lack team work, they are used to overpower the enemies through attrition, and was claimed to have taken down an entire nation

Name:Kishō Tensei (One's Own Life Reincarnation)
Rank: S
Type: Kinjutsu, Supplementary, Short range (0-5m)
Chakra Usage: All your Chakra and Health
Description: Chiyo created this technique while a member of Sunagakure's Puppet Brigade. The purpose of the technique was to give life to puppets, the puppets she had in mind being those of Sasori's parents. When the technique was found to require the sacrifice of the user's life, the project was halted and it was labeled a kinjutsu. To use this technique, Chiyo transfers her life-force to the intended target. She first tries to use it on Sakura Haruno, but since Sakura isn't dead yet it doesn't cost her her life. She later uses it on Gaara (with Naruto) to atone for sealing the One-Tailed Shukaku in his body, the reason for his death.

Clan: Kugutsu

RP sample: Kor was assigned a mission. The mission was to successfully bring a scroll back to his village. The scroll was very rare and contained very lethal jutsu. If this scroll was to get into the wrong hands, it could cause a war. Kor didn't think that anyone wanted that.

Kor had some weapons and they were ten kunai, seven shuriken, and two simple katana. He was on is way back to Sunagakure from Konohagakure. The scroll he needed to deliver was securely in his pocket. Kor knew his way back to his village, so it shouldn't be very difficult to get back.

Kor was about halfway between Suna and Konoha. That's when trouble started. Three cloud ninja had appeared in front of him. Of course they wanted the scroll. Kor could tell by the expressions on their faces that they wanted the power of the scroll so they could start an all-out attack on the other villages.

When the cloud ninjas approached Kor you could tell that he was in a rush and wasn't in the mood for what was about to happen. "What do you want?" Kor asked with a pissed looked. They laughed and then the third ninja attempted to attack Kor. Without hesitation, Kor jumped into the air and used one of the jutsu he knew, Fire Release: Great Fireball Technique and right behind that he used Fire Release: Pheonix Immortal Fire Technique. The blast from the two fire style jutsu had consumed the ninja and left him burnt to a crisp.

"You won't get away with that," one of the cloud ninja yelled, who seemed to be the leader of the group. As Kor came down to the ground, the cloud ninjas decided to attack. They used some kind of lightning jutsu that shot from their mouth. When Kor saw that he knew he had to retaliate, so he used Wind Release: Pressure Damage. The leader of the ninjas stopped his jutsu and jumped out of the way, but the second cloud ninja didn't make it out of the way in time. The jutsu Kor had used not only stopped and destroyed the jutsu used against him, but it hit the second cloud ninja and ripped him to shreds.

Kor wanted to get away from the last ninja because he knew that he didn't want to waste time, so he used Shadow Clone Jutsu and made three clones so they could stall and Kor could get away. He believed that each one of the clones would give at the most five minutes. Kor took this chance to make his escape. He looked back once more and then continued on jumping from tree to tree. Kor then thought, Hopefully the clones will give me enough time to at least get to the Suna Gate.

After about six minutes since Kor left the cloud ninja, he couldn't feel the presense of his clones. Then he stopped and heard a voice call to him and say, "Don't run. It'll only make things more painful for yourself." Kor was didn't recognize the voice, but then it called to him again and he began to recognize it, "This will be the day I avenge my friends." This time the voice was closer and Kor realized that the voice came from the leader of the group of cloud ninja.

Kor could now see the cloud ninja. The cloud ninja yelled out, "This will be the end for you." In the palm of the ninja's hand Kor could see lightning forming. When Kor saw that he knew that it was the infamous Lightning Blade. The only move that Kor thought could stop the powerful jutsu was his Rasengan, and then a thought had came to his head, Maybe I should try something different. Yeah this is the perfect time to use it.

Kor had used Shadow Clone Jutsu once more. This time he only made two clones. The cloud ninja had his jutsu almost 100% complete. Kor now had to be faster, so he had the first clone do the rotation in the original Kuroi's right hand and the other clone applied the wind element to the rotation. Kor knew there was another step for this jutsu to make it stronger, but Kor couldn't handle it right now.

Kor saw the cloud ninja rush toward so he did the same. He believed that his Wind Release: Rasengan could defeat the cloud ninja's Lightning Blade. As they approached each other Kor felt the intensity. They were now seconds away from each other.

As Kor and the cloud ninja clashed with each other, the ground below them began to tear. The two jutsu created an epic explosion. The explosion sent up a stream of light into the sky and after the stream of light faded there was a cloud of dust and debris surrounding the two ninjas. There was only one ninja standing and the other was on the ground dead. The cloud the began to fade. Now the victor of the fight could be partially seen.

When the cloud dissapeered it was Kor that remained standing. The arm that he used to attack the cloud ninja was scarred. That was intense, but I need to get to Suna fast, Kor thought while holding his right arm and walking toward Suna. Kor was in pain, but he had to keep going. His mission was more important than his life to him at the moment.

It had been three hours since Kor's battle with the cloud ninja. He had also just made it to the Suna Gates. His mission had might as well been a success. The sand ninja that were standing at the gate had let Kor into Sunagakure. He then headed to the Kazekage's office.

When he got to the office he knocked on the kage's door. The kage answered, "Come in." Kor came into the kage's office and said, "Here's the scroll with the jutsu you needed me to get." Kor placed the scroll onto the Kazekage's desk and then walked toward the door. The kage then said, "Thank you for delivering this to me, I'll let you know if you're needed again." With that last comment and his completed mission Kor left.

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Chakra Usage:
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